Monday, June 1, 2009

peer review

the reviews were very helpful in my topic but i changed my topic becausze i could not really get a good grasp on the topic. i am sure it is a problem everyone has as a writer but i finally stuck with a topic. and peer from my classmates help me develop my topic more...

Monday, May 18, 2009

Topic change

i changed my topic once again to something more worth reading and learning about.

The Artificial Heart

ABSTRACT
Estimates from the year 2006 show that 80,000,000 [1] Americans have one or more forms of cardiovascular disease:
· High blood pressure-73,600,000
· Coronary heart disease-16, 800,000
· Myocardial infarction or acute heart attack-7,900,000
· Angina pectoris, which is chest pain or discomfort caused by reduced blood supply to the heart muscle-9,800,000
· Stroke-6,500,000
· Heart Failures- 5,700,000
These are just a few of the many diseases that can attack the heart and limit its function. Therefore, the use of artificial hearts is imperative for the sake of the individuals who suffer from the above conditions or any other heart related illnesses. The artificial heart made its debut during the 1960’s and since then it is a remarkable invention and asset to the medical field. Different approaches have been taken over the course of time to develop different versions of artificial hearts to make it more efficient and comfortable for the patient. This device helps safe thousands of lives annually and is in wide usage all around the world. This research paper specifically addresses the significance of the artificial heart in our society and its product designs in order to determine which one of them fits the optimal choice. In addition, my research paper will discuss the cost to purchase ratio of the apparatus, the ethical and social issues affiliated with the device, the development and product testing of the artificial heart, the health risks of utilizing this machine, and the role of the FDA and legal issues associated with this medical equipment, the safeguards, personnel and precautions required.

STATEMENT OF THE PROBLEM
My motivation for undertaking this research device, the artificial heart, is to explore the elements of this marvelous device. I want to examine the complexity of this gadget inside the human body. I would like to be able to know all the duties it performs and how long will this apparatus last inside a patient and what are the health risks and benefits of the artificial heart. Various cardiac problems take a toll on the heart. There are many procedures to cure or cease them for a certain time interval until another alternative is available. Such problems are sinus tachycardia, sinus node reentry, multifocal atrial tachycardia, paroxysmal atrial tachycardia, atrial flutter, atrial fibrillation, systolic dysfunction, diastolic dysfunction, chronic volume overload, chronic pressure overload and dilated cardiomyopathy where specific procedures are in use. As far as receiving an artificial heart, problems such as decreased blood distribution, decreased heart function, or altered heart rhythms (Flash Med, April 30, 2009). The societal need for the artificial heart has increased over the years due to lack of heart surgery hospitals and corresponding personnel. Various heart complications are more than expected and heart surgery is the most effective response to the problem. There are times when a complete new artificial heart is required because there are not too many spare human hearts available for transplant. Therefore, the artificial heart is of an asset to the medical field and is a marvelous invention that will help thousands of people with chronic heart failure.
The artificial heart is a mechanical pump that serves as an actual human heart with certain limitations. The physical nature of this device consists of heart valves, compartments functioning as the atriums and ventricles, and the airways to allow the blood to enter and exit the ventricles made with titanium alloys, polyurethanes, metals, polymers, and ceramics. The artificial heart is a very complex device that also uses assist devices in order for it to function properly. Since every human being is different, every artificial heart made must be equipped to fit each individual’s body structure. Sometimes the artificial heart components may be too big or too small so various trials to make the artificial heart work for the patient must be done. Since it is, only a temporary device until a human heart becomes available, precautions to prevent any further complications continue to stress. The medical function of this mechanism is to allow the patient to live a normal life by providing a functioning artificial heart. The artificial heart serves to pump the oxygenated blood to the body trough the veins and arteries. The goal is to achieve normal rhythm and proper diastolic and systolic activity. The artificial heart is a medical haven for those patients who qualify to receive them. Since accidents and brutal incidents occur each day, organs are very of high demand for surgeries.
It is quite difficult to receive an immediate organ when an individual experiences a health crisis so machines tend to be a substitute for the real thing. The goal of the artificial heart is to make sure that blood is circulating through the body in order for its maintenance and have the patient back on their feet as soon as possible. Without the heart, no blood circulates and delivers oxygen to the body to provide the nutrients that it requires for survival. The artificial heart tries to accomplish a waiting safeguard until a human heart is available. Even though some patients cease living due to further cardiac complications, the artificial heart helps them maintain an active life in the time being. The apparent design limit of the artificial heart is the lack of permanence. Due to its temporary function, the device is not completely capable of lasting a long time to fit the patient’s lifespan. In addition, the artificial heart needs extra devices to work properly that on a waistband are carried by the patient everywhere they wish to travel, these devices are known as Ventricular Assist Devices (VAD).
The artificial heart uses aluminum alloy and polyester and carries a battery that has to be charged everyday in order for it to last six to eight hours, while in contrast - the human heart is a living muscle. Various check ups are required to assure that the artificial heart is on its right behavior. The human heart is a biological pump that administers the essential minerals and nutrients to the body trough blood without the use of machines. Without the heart, we will be incapable of living. The human heart serves as the center of our existence and is a complex organ that is difficult to replace. The artificial heart imitates the human heart due to similar operations by providing a short-term solution, but cannot fully replace it. Due to its structure, the artificial heart’s material may be of a hazard when inserted to the human body. Certain design materials may cause an unstable reaction when in contact with blood, thus careful assessment is always active. Until now metal, aluminum and Dacron polyester are the primary design materials for these machines.
[1] American Heart Association, April 29, 2009

Monday, May 4, 2009

Topic (GOD OF WAR) game.

I decided to change my topic to one of the best games in history to ever be played one that I enjoy playing and can not wait until part 3 is released some time in this year, ladies and gentlemen’s the game I am talking about is God of War yes I said it and am I sure most of you have played it or even heard of the game. Well I believe this game is one of the best games ever and it has everyone talking and pumped for the new one to be released even in the magazines are huge sections of the game being spoken of and how it will have more intense graphics. It is being critiqued by millions of editors, and so far it has only received good ratings and incredible comments on it effects and storyline. The game is about this Spartan named Kratos who tries to save his mortal life and goes through a series of events to save his family which are killed. Kratos becomes powerful and wants revenge against one of the most powerful god ever Ares, the storyline of the game has to do with Greek mythology mainly. This game is so great that you would play it more then once I have, get into it and you wont put the control down it is better then picking up a book and never putting it down because it is a awesome game.

Monday, April 20, 2009

Animal Cruelty

I decided to write my paper on animal cruelty but particularity on Pit bulls, because they are considered to be one of the viscous dogs in the society and because of their bad names that people give them they are hated and are treated the worst of all the other animals. Majority of the owners put these species to be fighters and vicious animals. I believe that all animals should be equally loved and appreciated no matter how bad they seem to be pit bulls are like babies they absorbed what you teach them and show them as loving parents just like you would love your own children. Most owners of pit bulls take these species in to love and care for them not to put them through mistreatment of any kind. Growing up I have owned about 4 pit bulls and all they did was bring joy to my life and make me want more to cherish and raise as my own. I am aware of the animal police trying to crack down on animal cruelty, but maybe we need more people to be aware of it because many animals are in the street and are suffering from hungry and mistreatment. Look at cats there are any just around the neighborhoods of others and people just ignore them as if they are not meant anything. I feel like am leaving all the other animals out since am only speaking about pit bulls.

Monday, March 23, 2009

Blog 2 My interest...

(Stem cells)
1. What affects does it have on the world?
2. If it helps to save a sick person then why not use it?
(Gay Marriage)
1. Why it should be legalized?
2. If we are so equal then why not accept it?
(Homeless People/ Hungry People)
1. What is being done to help the Falling Economy?
2. How can we limit the issues?
(Job Layoffs)
1. How are we suppose to survive?
2. What is being done to prevent layoffs?

Sunday, March 15, 2009

About Me

Salutations, My Name is Joann I Live in the Bronx, near the six-line I originally came to LaGuardia to study Vet-Tech but after a change of heart, because of the lost of my childhood dogs I switched to liberal arts. I am very down to earth, very quite at times but really fun to hang out with. I work at Home depot been there for a year and 6 months, it’s a great job has great benefits and I love it. After I receive my Associates I am going to John Jay to pursue Bachelors in forensic science, it’s a career I always wanted to do from the first time I watched CSI. I believe it would be an opportunity to help me bring people to Justice for their crimes.